I'm sort of tired so I'm just going to post a bit of the fanfiction I'm working on, I'd really like some feedback on it. Hope that's ok.
As John drove from his house on the outskirts of Swindon to the Stadium, he reflected over the first week of training. He had worked the players hard, they weren’t going to be content with survival, he wanted to challenge. He had instilled his routine. In the morning they worked on fitness, after lunch they worked on technical skills and teamwork and then they finished with an hour long lecture on tactics from John.
It had always been John’s motto that no player is ever bigger than the team, but he couldn’t help but wonder about bald John Green. He was a gentleman and always tried to get everyone else involved but there was no denying he was just much more talented than anyone else at the club. In the last week alone, John had received two offers from much bigger clubs about signing him.
As John pulled in at the stadium, he saw that a few of the players and staff were there already. He walked into the dressing room and saw Dave Mustaine, Bald John Green and Voluptuous Pericard. Voluptuous was an exciting young French striker. He had talent, no doubt, he just lacked a little consistency.
Let me know what you think. As for something I've gotten back into............... can I say reading? I used to read all the time when I was young but then I sort of got really busy and didn't make time for it and I'm starting to read much more now.DFTBA
Adam
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